Ernie's Blog
Tuesday, October 12, 2010
Narration
The things done well and liked:
1) Flow from one event to the next
2) The actions of the shoe
3) How the characters emotions and the shoe connected
4) The ending of the shoe life during that event
5) The imagery
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